#3
Our chemicals
combined
re-arranged
we became eternal
and bright
fading out never
even in sleep
I can't get my mind off you
I am stuck bewildered by the scent you left
Oh the scar you've drawn
on my skin...
This taste
blending
enticing
at the tip of my tongue
A memory
my sanity
all that's left off me
Cover me with your kisses
Wrap me in your arms
Oh this hunger for your essence
unsatiable...
-K-
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combined
re-arranged
we became eternal
and bright
fading out never
even in sleep
I can't get my mind off you
I am stuck bewildered by the scent you left
Oh the scar you've drawn
on my skin...
This taste
blending
enticing
at the tip of my tongue
A memory
my sanity
all that's left off me
Cover me with your kisses
Wrap me in your arms
Oh this hunger for your essence
unsatiable...
-K-
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your poem is cute,
ReplyDeletesweet sentiment...
very well expressed.
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We became eternal.. what a lovely thought... I liked it. The ending was beautiful too...
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very interesting.. a chemical love :)
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'Unsatiable' describes all. :) Good thought there.
ReplyDeleteA nicely done piece - love the imagery of the senses that you generate.
ReplyDeletelovely poem dear :)
ReplyDeleteReally cool poem! Intense images worked really well!
ReplyDeleteThis speaks to the romantic in me. I know what it's like to be unable to get my mind off someone.
ReplyDeleteSome lovely images here. I understand the feelings:
ReplyDeletehttp://shawnbird.com/2010/11/06/old-love/ is my rally entry this week.
Shawn
loved the reference to chemicals mixing and the imagery was great, brought it down to the very small to express the very large. well done!
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here is mine:
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/today-i-write-it-down.html
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/09/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-participation-awards/
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